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domingo, 4 de julio de 2010

October,1979.




I wrote three more songs.I note some influences….Beatles, , perhaps specially Paul Mc Cartney, Danny O’keefee, some other like John Denver or Paul Simon.
These songs are not really fine, but They can show my evolution and the music I loved.
First is “Watership Down” based in the book by Richard Adams.
I read it in Spanish and I have some mistakes ‘cos the names of the characters were translate to Spanish and then I did a incorrect translation to English.
Second is “I’ve got a loving”, a love song influenced clearly by themes like “Oh Darling” by Paul Mc Cartney and third is “Maybe”,(sorry Mr Macca is seems a bad copy of your “Maybe I´m amazed” but remember I was fithteen).
And these are the words:

WATERSHIP DOWN

If sometime you go to Watership Down
You greet for me to Jlao, Speedy and Acorn
Too, Trefoil, Vilturil, Fifth and Falcon
Small Bell, Jizentlay, Machineel and Crateo.

Because they are all my friends,of course
Too, Silvered, Taled-beared, Lion´s Tooth
Strawberry and Kejaar , the good seagull
Savage Taili, Hazelnut Tree and Clever Rapsberry Bush

In Watership Down are a lot of friends
And with story It hasn´t the end
Their lifes are my bestter glad
Oh Watership Down you are my friends

For living in peace they had to fight
Against Jomba, Hound, Cat and Efrafa
Against the Savage and fierce Gral Mustard
But they have conquered thanks to Fri,Rajaviento and El Arairal

And my friends have lived forever well
They’ve had to me together forever with luck
And they’ve been for me though seems a fool
My better present in all my long life´s days


In Watership Down are a lot of friends
And with story It hasn´t the end
Their lifes are my bestter glad
Oh Watership Down you are my friends

(You will see a lot of mistakes but I have never wanted to do corrections)


I’VE GOT A LOVING

I’ve got a feeling and I know what it is
I’ve got a loving and I saw her yesterday
I’ve got a liking and she likes me vey much
I’ve got a loving and I love her

I’ve got a loving and I know how she is
Ooh, I´m strumbling with a dark fall
I’ve got a loving and I know how she is
I’ve had that fight and I´m getting high.

I’ve got a loving, she wants me how I am
I’ve got a loving, she loves me and I know that
I’ve got a loving, and she needs , my oh my

I’ve got a loving,I’ve got a heart
I’ve got a loving and I love her
I’ve got a loving and I want her (how she is)
I’ve got a loving how She´s and I love her

I´ve got a feeling
I’ve got a loving
I’ve got a loving
I’ve got a loving
I’ve got a loving
I’ve got a loving.


(Really, really a simple love song)




MAYBE

Maybe I´m a poor devil
And really maybe of truth I’m a friend
Maybe I’m in everywhere
Where the dirty evil and its men.

Maybe I’m a gentleman
I´m really sure if I’m not I can be
Maybe I’m a flying man
And so I’m travelling across the space to be free.

Maybe, Maybe, Maybe, Maybe,
Maybe, the world is rolling on
Maybe, Maybe, Maybe, Maybe,
Maybe,the sun is grand old
Maybe, the moon wants to speak to me of life

Maybe,the north wind
Is aclaring my dark head
Maybe I need the mountains for living,
Maybe, in my life is failing something.

Music

Maybe, Maybe, Maybe, Maybe,
Maybe, the world is rolling on
Maybe, Maybe, Maybe, Maybe,
Maybe,the sun is grand old
Maybe, the moon wants to speak to me of life.

Maybe I´m a poor devil
And really maybe of truth I’m a friend
Maybe I’m in everywhere
Where the dirty evil and its men.


(You know, maybe….)

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