HELP ME,PLEASE
FEEL FREE TO CORRECT MY ENGLISH
miércoles, 14 de julio de 2010
ALL THIS AND ROCK AND ROLL TOO
The Band called "Waterfalls" only survived a few months, but I felt fine and composed a rock'n'roll (my first) in the beginning called "El Rock del Campurrito".We used onomatopoeics sounds only to sing it.But It must have words and then I called "When the girls".Simple message, It´s not enough good but we enoyed ourselves singing it.
Today I read and I feel strange feelings.It´s a MALE CHAUVINIST letter ,perhaps even stupid but when I wrote it I didn´t feel that.Only a rock and a letter to sing, no message,sorry GIRLS for the letter but I want to show my mistakes too.
WHEN THE GIRLS
When the girls are smiling
When the girls are looking
When the girls are dancing
When the girls are moving
Boys we know what they're telling us
When the girls are speaking
and the night is finishing
When the girls are lonely
When the girls are pretty
boys we know what we must do
When my girl smiles at me
When my girl ho-holds me
When my girl feels lonely
When my girl needs loving
I know what she´s telling me
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Rock & Roll with a light touch of rumba? If one day we know personally, I’ll ask you to sing this song. Remember this. I like friend.
ResponderEliminarThanks,Luismi.It will be a pleasure for me.See you
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