By foot or in boat ...life flows on.

HELP ME,PLEASE

FEEL FREE TO CORRECT MY ENGLISH

martes, 22 de junio de 2010

WRITING IN ANOTHER LANGUAGE



Sorry,my mistakes, crazy things and som stupids ideas I could have ...I only want to show these songs I wrote in English but Spanish Way.Thanks
and this is first ...... I wrote it in 1977, I was thirteen and ...
IT´S RAINING
It´s raining, the town is dark
It´s late ,the night began
The water falls and wets my hair
And now I feel freedom comes.

Peace flows out from every pore of the night
Happiness walks with me
The man and the spirit see them side by side
Now It`s the moment to think.

It´s raining, the town is dark
It´s late ,the night began
The water falls and wets my hair
And now I feel freedom comes.

Poor drunken at the corner can´t get up …yeah
Some hands help him to arrive
He gives you an advice that you must not forget
And it comes into your heart

It´s raining, the town is dark
It´s late ,the night began
The water falls and wets my hair
And now I feel freedom comes.

There up the moon looks for you and you feel glad
You know where is the goodness
You, that accompanied me in my moments of sadness
You, great and individual mind.

It´s raining, the town is dark
It´s late ,the night began
The water falls and wets my hair
And now I feel freedom comes.


And yes,It was indeed.

C.D.´Songs always in Soundclick

2 comentarios:

  1. I'm so surprise, I didn't think you would write in English as you do. It's a very sensitive composition and I've enjoyed so much.
    I hope to read something more.

    Hugs.

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  2. Thanks,Sunshine, you looks like your nickname.Kisses

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